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Driftedspore
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Exerpt from mod in progress, need help!

Post by Driftedspore » Wed Apr 16, 2014 4:23 pm


 


Broken banks is a cannon location in North Carolina based on outer banks. This is an excerpt of a concept character.


 


Lee Becker: 


Lee Becker was born in the year 2253, the second child of a pair of brahmin farmers in Broken Banks N.C. He has very little memories of his mother, who died giving birth to his youngest brother when he was only six years old, but described her as a sweet, kind woman who wasn't afraid to role her sleeves up when the time came. He describes his father as a hard working man who had a penchant for the bottle, but never laid a hand on his children and tried to raise them to be self sufficient men of the wastes. Lee's father and older brother Riley taught Lee and his younger brother Ray how to shoot, track, skin/clean an animal, fight, grow crops, just about everything you'd need to know to survive. His life took a tragic turn, however, when he and Ray went hunting with their father when he was 13. Their father had been drinking all day as they were stalking a herd of bighorner through the wetlands when he carelessly stumbled into a cazador nest, an area he knew to avoid. He recalls the horribly shrill sound of his father screaming as the cazador surrounded him, and watching has he curled up on the ground as he was pierced over and over by their dagger like stingers. He and his brother fired into the swarm, killing only one but frightening the others prompting them to fly away. When they approached their father, he was still breathing, but the amount of poison in his body left him unable to talk or move, on top of the horrible pain it was causing him. Coupled with the massive blood loss, they knew he was dying a slow, painful death and that he couldn't be saved. After much debate with his brother, he knew that they couldn't save him, opting to euthanize via gunshot. Lee said that moment shattered any innocence he had left in him and that he no longer took the horror of the wastelands for granted. 


    They carried their fathers body back to the farm, burying him next to their mother. The next year was extremely difficult for the boys. Responsibilties fell to Riley, him being the oldest of the three. He was still a young man, however, and try as he might wasn't the rugged survivalist his father was. Their crops died and most of their brahmin due to malnourishment, causing the brothers to more often than not go hungry. When Lee was 16, he woke up finding a note from Riley saying that he had left Broken Banks to go out west where he would try to start a new life. He was sorry it had to be this way, but he could no longer stand sitting in an old, forgotten farm starving and waiting for an inevitable death. Lee never understood how his brother could just walk out on the only other two people he had in this world and blames himself, wondering if he had made more of an effort to help his brother out as an equal instead of relying on him as a care giver. Not long after his brother left, Lee realized he and Ray would surely die if they stayed on the farm and decided to travel to the colony Croatoan, a pre-war tourist destination that was turned into a  trading post. 


    Lee and Ray's skills were not particularly suited to living in a colony, so it was hard adjusting to a less self-sufficient lifestyle. Lee worked with Ray in the town general store where they both found life to be monotonus and boring, opting to spend all their free time and caps getting piss-drunk in the bar and gambling; both frowned upon in the town leading to problems with "law enforcement" if you could call them that. They found their purpose when a local raider leader nick named "The Swamp Fox" after a pre-war historical figure raided the colony trying to take supplies from the prosperous town.  Armed with only a pair of .30-06 bolt action rifles, Lee and Ray established a permimeter and fought off wave after wave of raiders, saving the towns supplies. The town was only slightly damaged by a small fire that the raiders lit, but there were quite a few civillian casualties. After the battle, they established the "Minutemen", a small, poorly armed militia that they personally instructed on shooting and wasteland survival. With the damage to the city repaired, they started taking the Minute Men out of patrols, hunting raiders and laying traps, which discouraged raiders from attacking Croatoan. 


    Finally finding their place in the town, they each got married; Lee to a girl named Ashley McCourt and Ray to a girl named Melanie Burch. Life seemed relatively normal, with the Minute Men rarely being called to action and the two becoming family men. Ray had a young son whom he loved dearly and swore off drinking forever so as not to make the same mistakes his father did, and Ashley was infertile. One day they got a report of heavy raider activity in the Wetlands, and assembled the Minutemen to lay an ambush for them. The Swamp Fox, however, knew they would attempt something and still wanting to avenge the losses he had taken due to the militia, established a counter ambush. As they trudged through the murky waters to the raider's last known location, gunfire began to rain down on them from the forest. They were caught out in the open, and men began to drop like flies. As they returned fire on the forest line, Ray began to shout at the men to advance and ran forward, but was shot multiple times in the chest and died instantly. Raiders began to charge out of the woods armed with blades, and a hysterical Lee took two machetes off the corpse of two dead Minutemen and started slaughtering scores of raiders, screaming how he would "Rip every raider limb from limb and rape their fucking corpses" before he was pulled away by the surviving militia.


    Lee didn't return to Croatoan. He instead decided to wander around Broken Banks hunting and killing raiders, mutilating their corpses and leaving them as an example. He considered going west and trying to find his brother, but couldn't bring himself to leave his home or all these memories behind. Tiring of revenge, Lee returned to Croatoan two years after Ray died learning that Ashly remarried and Melanie killed her and Ray's child and commit suicide when she learned of his death. The Minutemen were surprisngly still around, being taken over by a mysterious man who Lee never actually met, but heard he was part of the remnants of the USMC. Though he tried to settle back down, he was vilified by the towns people for abandoning his wife and leaving the militia leaderless, causing a spike in raids leading dozen of innocent civillians to die. Left the town again, finally settling down in Kill Devil Hills, a city where people worship the Wright brothers as gods due to the memorial they found which was another popular pre war tourist attraction. Lee sits around in the bar all day, drinking his troubles away, now a relic of his former self looking for a purpose in life and trying to get revenge on the raiders who took his brother away.


 


Description: Lee is caucasian and an average height with a rugged build and sports black 5 o'clock shaddow and a shaved head. His signature weapon is his scopeless .30-06 Springfield, but also pulls out his duel machetes when he is backed into a corner. He wears a flannel shirt and blue jeans, and is very rarely seen without a cigarette in his hand. 


 


Quests: Does Baby Need His Bottle?- Help Lee quit drinking by either passing a speech check, medical check, or aquiring four fixers.


Rewards: Aquire Lee as a companion 


My Brother's Keeper (5 history points required)- Hunt down and kill the Swamp Fox and his men. 


Rewards- 1200xp. Special weapon "Ray's .30-06"  found on the Swamp Fox's corpse. 


 

 



Perk: Lee gives you the Country Tough perk, increasing your over all damage resistance by 10%


 


retlaw83
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What is it you need help with

Post by retlaw83 » Wed Apr 16, 2014 7:37 pm

What is it you need help with?


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Driftedspore
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Me and a couple colleagues

Post by Driftedspore » Wed Apr 16, 2014 8:41 pm

Me and a couple colleagues are writing a baseline. We are hoping to get people who know more about modding to help this idea into fruition. We are also hoping to make it ttw compatable. So in short, we need anyone willing to help if you've got anything to contribute. 



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Drifted, I'm going to be

Post by Gribbleshnibit8 » Wed Apr 16, 2014 9:50 pm

Drifted, I'm going to be completely honest with you here. The best way to get this idea turned into a mod is to figure out how to use GECK, and the tools available, and make something. Anything. If you want to get started working on your idea here, that's fine. When you run into issues, or don't understand something, make an effort to look it up FIRST, before asking. There are lots of resources out there that you can use to figure out something, other mods and the wiki are usually the best places to look.


I'm speaking just for myself, but I know it's a shared sentiment, when I say that people with the know how to help you are going to be much much more inclined to help if you have something to put forward and say "This is what I have, I'm stuck at this point, can someone with more experience help me?"


I'm not trying to be rude or mean, just honest. I'm trying to help you here, because I've seen a lot of people post big ideas that never get anywhere because they expect to find other people to do the work. Build a proof of concept, and you're much more likely to get somewhere with it.



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I removed the other thread.

Post by TJ » Wed Apr 16, 2014 10:01 pm

I removed the other thread. From what I gather it was pretty much the same as this one.


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retlaw83
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Pretty much what Gribbs said,

Post by retlaw83 » Thu Apr 17, 2014 1:12 pm

Pretty much what Gribbs said, Drifted. The people who know how to do these things are involved with their own projects, and these kind of mods take time. The only way you're going to see the mod you want get made is by learning how to make it.


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interesting and gripping

Post by A55K1KA » Sun Apr 20, 2014 3:48 am

interesting and gripping story to say the least.


I might be interested in helping, by which I will need some information before I can definitively say if I can help or not.


 


First of all how does the story get told?


a) is the player is told this information through dialogue or something similar?


b) is the player going to relive the events through his eyes (like flashbacks/simulations) ? <-- would make it very immersive if done right, in my opinion.


c) something completely unrelated to the above two.


 


Second, do you need any custom meshes made?


like.. architecture, armour, clothing, clutter, weapons and such.


 


Third, do you (or anyone working on the project with you) have any experience with the following?..


a) Geck editing in general, ie adding new items, making NPCs and editing / creating new cells.


b) Fallout NV Scripting.


c) creating quests and adding custom dialogue.


d) Plot writing ( i can see you do but i am including it anyway).


e) drawing designs and concepts (mainly of any custom meshes so it is perfectly clear what you would want).


f) mesh editing, and/or texturing.


 


Do you want to have any unique features for the follower? or do you want it to just have basic functionallity and custom dialogue?


Does the follower have a custom voice? if so any information about that would be helpful too.


Do you have any ideas for followup quest, like returning to his old home to pay his respects to his family and to maybe bury his brother from the raider attack?


or even confronting the eldest brother about him leaving them behind.


also maybe place some trigger spots where something reminds him of his past which would lead to the flashback or dialogue options to talk about it.


 


Thats all i can think of at this point, but if you have any further information that i havent mentioned above.. feel free to include that too.


Once i know the answers to the above I should have a clearer idea of the direction of your mod and would be able to say what i can and cannot help with, might even extend to someone else reading this who might be interested in helping but isnt sure what you want exactly.


Also sorry for the excessively large post.


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